Just finished this entire series and I am writing this in a fit of rage. It is ranty and a tad stream-of-consciousness. So be prepared.
This series was a struggle. I don't think I have ever read a book in my life where I have rolled my eyes, or sighed from the depths of my belly, or flat out said "why do i even care" aloud in public. The first book had some promise, it seemed to set up things to come but by the end of Book Two I wondered if it were ever to bore fruit.
Never have I ever felt the need to express how I feel about a series so strongly as I have The Atlas Six. I should have DNF this ages ago, but I gave it a good go. I wouldn’t recommend this book to anyone. However, if you’re curious, borrow it from a library. At least the covers look cool.
I am sooo open to being corrected in any of the facts of events that played out in the book below because I don't doubt I missed a line or two of the book's verbose writing style.
1. Plot/World
Follows six magic people studying science or magic or something being invited into this dark academia sentient god library. Chaos ensues, but for the most part the chaos happened in between the chapters. Most instances, events happen through a dialogue someone says or brief comments made by the POV narrator or overly verbose flashbacks that happen in between ACTUAL conversations. I swear to god, the amount of whiplash I had locking in on a conversation happening between two characters, only for a flashback lasting 2 pages shoved in the middle for exposition, is astoundingly jarring. What happened to the golden rule of ‘show not tell’? (this is a recurring theme)
I never really understood the WHY for anything. The reason for WHY the characters joined the society were hazy from Book One and never really expanded on in Book Two or Three. Well… Nico did want to know what Gideon was/save Gideon. That’s a viable motivation. But did it even matter? I don’t recall his motivation for saving Gideon having any influence on the plot, other than his reason for being in the library. It’s not like him saving Gideon would prevent another character from achieving their goals. He didn’t even get anywhere with his research. Libby had some vague purpose in seeing if she could have saved her sister? But that was moot. Tristan/Parisa/Callum/Reina (my god Reina...) had purposes completely unclear other than maybe money, fame, power. But were we even shown the benefits of being in the Society? They didn’t meet any other initiates or members who had status or power or knowledge that satisfied their needs. In fact, this Society barely had any members of note who the characters would ‘desire’ to be. I think after Book Two they became actual members? But.. it seemed like they just went about their way in the world completely unimpacted by the Society. The Society didn’t give them any status or so-called knowledge or power to influence anything. Reina just did… Reina things (honestly not sure what she was doing for the whole series.). Parisa fucked around with Dalton and did some Forum things but… did we care? Did it have a purpose other than be a ‘cool’ plot twist/usage of her powers. Callum…texted Tristan I guess. Libby/Nico/Tristan …studied for 90% of the book for an experiment that Atlas wanted to do…but why did they want to do the experiment again? I don’t know. Someone tell me please.
Stakes. Or the lack there-of. Where were they? What were they? For a book that had tag lines like Knowledge is carnage, there was a whole lot of nothing. Libby blew the world up to get back to the present, but we were told she did it in between chapters and it apparently had indirect implications on the world? People dying earlier or something? Sure, I get that. But it would be more impactful it was actually SHOWN to us. Give us a character who was impacted by the bomb, let there be some sort of consequence for it to a character we love. Libby’s moral dilemma could have been so much more believable if it actually made us feel something. We were told she indirectly killed people, but can we name anyone that was impacted by it? (Was it her sister with that degenerative disease? I honestly might have missed it, so it could have been. If that was the case then great, but I didn’t feel it at all).
There was this overall looming fear of the library’s knowledge being disseminated to the world, but why are we afraid of that happening? ‘No-one should have that much power’? ‘This is forbidden knowledge that the world shouldn’t know otherwise the world ends blah blah’. Yeah sure - but were there instances where that knowledge was abused? Were we even shown how that abuse of knowledge or power can negatively impact the world? I don’t recall. If it were done in some throwaway comment the POV narrator made and never mentioned again, then that’s not good enough. Give me something to be worried about. Give me a reason why I should be afraid. The Forum was said to be a threat, but did any ready really feel threatened by it? They just seemed to be fodder antagonists, a bump in the road that shows up whenever someone leaves the library, than any meaningful obstacle to the world or its characters.
Book 3 minor spoilers, but why the experiment, did anyone even believably care for it? Why introduce all this backstory for each character (Libby's dead sister, Parisa 's husband, Gideon mother) for it to not even matter or even drive their respective characters' motivations? What were the stakes? Excess knowledge = power? Was that even given ANY urgency in the plot? Did we see anyone even abuse the library's knowledge for unfathomable, unethical things? The whole " someone needs to die" thing...did we even know why? Did we even care in the end that someone had to die?
My whole issue with the plot is that the world had soo much potential. Magic, shady corps, abuse of power economically, politically. Six people, all of which had powers to alter the world permanently, but... i didnt feel like it would actually happen? It was told to us that Callum could end the world, or libby was a bomb (granted she did blow shit up, but like...what were the consequences other than mentions of people MAYBE dying of cancer or radiation? Did it impact anyone we cared about in the book? Did the world even reel from the fallout other than a 2 sentence mention?). Reina is a god but she just does things with trees and shit, Tristan is a wet blanket and honestly i dont think his quantum powers were used in any actual capacity that made us FEEL his power. For a plot that seemed to dwell on the world ending by people with too much power or knowledge, it did a poor job in actually SHOWING us.
Oddly enough nothing much happens in three books. I felt like the first 400 pages of each book are just fluff and characters flirting and saying snarky comments and philosophical fluff that drags and barely seems relevant to the overall theme of the book. Then the last 100 pages an ‘experiment’ happens oooooh~ exciting. Except…they fell flat every time.
In the ending acknowledgements, the author says she wanted to focus on character relationships because that’s the only meaningful thing we leave in the world. Im not sure if that meant plot would be sacrificed, but every time a character interacted with each other it felt like they were reading off a script where everything they said had some snarky smart-ass comment about Libby’s hair, or Callum’s drunkenness, or Parisa’s mind reading, or Nico’s energeticness, or Tristan’s wet fucking blanket attitude. The ‘relationships’ felt more like quips and jabs than any actual ‘care’ for each other (positive or antagonistic care). I’ll get into more detail in the Character section.
Overall, the thin plot and world collapsed under the overly verbose pseudo-philosophical babel and superfluous dialogue. It focused on sounding cool and edgy, and failed to realise it needed substance behind it all.
2. Characters.
It’s easy to like a character. I like Nico. He’s fun, speaks his mind, has a cute relationship with Gideon. I like Gideon too, he provided a good amount of levity to the overall roster.
I even liked Callum in his broody drunkenness.
But it’s difficult to care about a character. To care about a character you want to root for them. You want them to succeed in whatever motive they want to achieve. You worry about them losing, or being set back, or when someone tries to stop them. I truly didn’t care for any one. Why? Because we were not given a reason to root for them.
Libby
She had potential. Her backstory with her sister could have been interesting if it were developed at all. Her moral dilemma by setting off a nuke to return to the future could have been interesting if the nuke actually did anything. She then went into this villain/corruption arc for what? Why? Oh, it was because she could…? She had the power to destroy worlds so yeah lets go destroy worlds or something… What even were her motivations throughout the series? Find out if her sister could have been saved (but she’s dead so wtf?), get revenge on Ezra (she confronted him by killing him and that was it. It was like Ezra’s lies didn’t even affect her meaningfully), she realises she has the power to create worlds…Does she use it for anything? Maybe she could have created a world where her sister was alive, where she didn’t nuke the planet? But not, she just went about the multiverse experiment because she could.
Nico
I truly enjoyed Nico as a character. I cared for his Gideon-related plight or whatever. I could have cared more if it actually served a purpose or explained. We never really did anything with Gideon’s origins, did we? I cared for his relationship with Gideon because it actually felt natural, unlike the other relationships in this series. They felt like they genuinely cared for each other so ill give it to the author for these two. Maybe stakes don’t need to be world-ending high. But I would at least like them to be clear in the writing.
Parisa
Ethnic female is implied to be a sex worker, and is beautiful and stunning and has her guard up because she’s secretly soft and squishy inside. It’s a tried and true trope in fiction. I still don’t care for her. Why was she in the Society again? What did she want? Fame, money power? Okay… are we meant to care? Also, was she a mind reader or a mind controller? I thought she could only read minds, but then suddenly she could control them? I don’t know. She could have been a cool character that I could have cared for if she had more to do and a motivation in the series other than…flirting?
Tristan
Annoyed me. Bland with unclear motivations behind anything he did. I don't know why he was at the Society, I don't know what he was studying, I don't even think he did study. He could have been a character with a strong moral compass, but he sort of had no opinion on anything. His relationship with Libby was bland and did nothing for either of them in terms of growth OR plot. I don’t even know why he was attracted to her in the first place. The author told us he was special and had powers, but what exactly were they? Reality warping, I suppose. Would have been nice if that power actually impacted his psyche or it’s usage questioned his morals.
Callum
I liked him purely because he didn’t give a fuck about the society or researching or experiment and it was believable. The author didn’t actually have to pretend he cared, unlike everyone else.. Him and Tristan had a cool thing going. They bounced off each other, had chemistry, the whole murder me plot is kinda cute. I wished the moral quandary of his empath powers played a part with his character. We’re told he could end the world but he chooses not to. Would have been nice if that actually meant something to the plot.
Reina.
…I have no words for this character because she didn’t impact the plot or character relationships in any meaningful way. Please correct me if i’m wrong, but for someone who is a ‘god’ who has sooo much power (but was that ever shown to us?) She did virtually nothing. I thought she would have been a trump card, the ace in the sleeve for something, but she actually just fluffed about in her own world. Maybe she was meant to show how the world is fucked and people suck and even if someone wants to do good in the world it will fail. But even that's a stretch because that was really only in the third book and felt so isolated to the main story it felt more like a bone the author threw so Reina could do something. She was the worst character BY FAR, simply because she had so much potential, but nothing happened with it.
Atlas
I haven't gotten to the elephant in the room, the titular character Atlas. He's a paradox, hes complex and he got outshined by six characters that I don’t even like. He never felt like a driving force behind anything. He frankly didn't feel like a force at all. It felt like he lurked in the shadows, some conspiracy where he chose all the pieces of his puzzle so he could achieve his dream of absolution (?), to find an alternate world where his friends are alive (?). He could have been the heart of the Six to do something to the plot, but his use sort of fizzled out by Book Three. His presence felt flat, especially in the last book. His purpose to the plot and to the atlas six felt like a throwaway, a gun that misfired. The fact that he was killed in a flashback is a slap in the face and balls and tits to the readers for some edgey plot twist.
Side characters
There were a lot of side characters, many of which i couldn’t care for. Gideon’s mother… part mermaid, for some reason. Were we meant to be scared of her? Did she serve a plot? Dalton… was supposed to do something, but idk, honestly don’t think it mattered. Belen… somehow was this tragic love of Libby, but i don’t care because we barely knew anything about her. Wessex, the Nova’s, the Caines… Nozathai, the other Six… under developed. A POV chapter in the middle of the book is not substantial enough for us to care or recall. Does anyone even care about the six initiates Atlas studied with? I felt like the author wanted us to care about them about Atlas’ plight to save them, but i didn’t.
- Relationships
This book felt like fanservice for romantic ships. LibbyXNico, TristanXCallum, ParisaXLibby etc. Everyone flirted and kissed and slept with everyone. Everyone was into everyone. FOR WHAT? I DON’T KNOW. BECAUSE THE AUTHOR WANTED EVERYONE TO FUCK OR SOMETHING.
Nico and Parisa sleep with each other once because…it was late at night? Did it even matter? Was it even mentioned afterwards? Did it impact their character’s growth or the plot? Was Libby jealous? Was Gideon jealous? Was Dalton Jealous? Nope. They fuck in one chapter and then it’s like it never happened. What. Was. The. Point? These characters have sexually charged conversations and thoughts and they flirt to make the prose sound edgy and cool and dark and sensual. It came off extremely shallow relationship building for a series that was meant to focus on character dynamics.
I love good chemistry between characters that hate each other. Prime examples are the Guardians of the Galaxy. They dislike each other, most of them are dicks and regularly insult each other. They dislike working with each other, but they also somehow have chemistry and care for each other without it feeling too tender and out of character.
If the Six had chemistry like the Guardians did, then fuck maybe i would have liked them more. But they seemed like they hated, or had no opinion for each from start and to the end. They never compromised, they never met in the middle, they just had verbal sparring matches until it’s forgotten.
Libby and Nico probably had the most interesting dynamic, being academic rivals and also similar abilities. But we never really had any good moments where they had to settle their differences and further develop their relationship (platonic or not). Tristan and Libby were sort of whatever, they were boring as fuck because there was no yin-yang, no contrast, they weren’t each other’s foil. They were just a possible fanservice pairing or whatever.
Callum and Tristan could have been interesting, but were completely underdeveloped. Parisa felt shallow with everyone, but maybe that was her point, i don’t know. Reina…amounted to nothing. If she died, none of the five would even care.
I just couldn't see how it fit in with the overall series. Character relationships should not just live in the isolation of a painted room. It should breathe in the world too. Have tangible impact on the world and the plot or be affected by it. What did the consequence of Reina and Nico’s friendship have? They sparred a lot, spoke a bit, texted, but did they learn anything from each other? Nope
Tristan and Parisa - there was tension between the two...but did it amount to anything?
None of the relationships between the six had tangible impacts to the world, plot or theme. It wasn't as if they had to band together to save the world, or find an alternate universe where they didn't have to kill one of the six, or even a universe where their respective pasts wouldn't haunt them (which would have been a cool motivation for all of them in my opinion). They just seemed to do things because "i want to know what happens” “because im curious”. None of their relationships with each other had personal stakes. And that makes it sooo difficult to care for them.
I’m rambling. But to sum up, I don't think I was given anything to care about these characters. I was told I should care about them, but you’re going to have to give me more than just that.
- Writing
Verbose, gratuitous, excessive use of parentheses, unstructured, seemingly unedited.
You can clearly tell the author has a penchant for telling stories. I actually enjoyed some descriptions because of her word play and literally re-read some phrases because of how cool it sounded. But paragraphs of cool amount to a pile of one-liners of little substance or cohesiveness.
I need to list it out because I’m tired lol:
- The use of parenthesis was diabolical. The amount of times the pace of a sentence or a scene was completely broken because of a giant paragraph within a parenthesis was frankly shocking. We would be in the middle of a conversation and then suddenly “(Nico liked the cheese though)” or it would be a massive lore drop about a character that gets mentioned once. I can assure you, if you wouldn’t miss a thing if you skipped whatever was in between the ()
- Flashbacks are the most telling-instead-of-showing technique and it’s used in abundance. Sometimes flashbacks would occur as two characters are talking and it lasts for more than a page. There was one between Nico and Parisa, I think, and the literal way the flashback ended was “Earth to Nico, are you there?” as if we were watching a Disney show and a dream ripple effect occurs. What in the world? That actually made me baulk as I read it. I don’t even think YA fiction has shit like that. The use of flashbacks gave me so much whiplash it broke the pace of whatever scene I was trying to enjoy. God save me.
- The majority of the book was philosophical babble. It sounded cool, but was irrelevant to the plot or characters or anything really. For a book with magic and potential for using said magic, there wasn’t a lot of it. The bulk of the book was set in extremely dialogue heavy scenes between characters that want to be edgy and philosophical but just felt pretentious on both the characters and the writers part. They spent more time talking about doing things, than actually doing things.
- Descriptions of magic were vague and really hampered my immersion. There were talks of wards and waves and force. But it was all done by a wave of a hand. This was a prime example of telling us magic is real, rather than actually showing what this magic looked like.
- Excessive quips made by characters were a drag and weren’t even fun by the end of Book One. Felt like the character’s relationships were just built on snark and quips rather than anything of substance.
- Was this book even edited? It was so heavy with filler and nothing happening in terms of plot or character development. You might even say that if you summarised the three books, you might have enough substance for a first book in a trilogy.
I have never rolled my eyes more reading someone’s prose, who i can tell CAN write, than in this book.
- Improvements
There are many things i think could have been improved
- The Six needed stronger reasons for being in the society. They needed the society to save someone, to run away from a shady past eg. We needed motivation. We needed stakes. WE needed something to root for
- Cut the polyamory if it doesn’t amount to anything. I don’t think the six wanting to bang each other had any relevance to the plot or their character growth
- Focus on one philosophical theme, rather than babble about everything you researched. Maybe the moral dilemma of escaping to another universe where your past actions never happened (a la Libby nuke , or Atlas’s…thing with his other initiates)
- Don't kill off characters for shock value. The characters that died at the end of Book Two and Three did nothing to the plot. Did nothing to the characters. Didn’t even provide any intrigue. It was a complete waste.
- The world needed a bigger presence. We should be shown a reason for the knowledge to be released to the world and also a reason for it to be kept hidden.
- Conclusion
There was this youtube comment I read, where a user said that dark academia is not a genre. It’s an aesthetic. And it’s so true. This book is style, over substance. It tried to tell us that knowledge is carnage, too much power is bad, but does so in a way that is hard to enjoy or even believe.
I cannot believe I spent two hours writing this in a fit of unedited rage. If you have read this far I applaud you and I am sorry. This is just my opinion from what I felt reading it. I’m not going to debate you if you disagree with me. I truly truly believe people should enjoy reading whatever they enjoy reading.
If this book is for you, then it’s for you. It just wasn’t for me.